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I decided that I want a feral and furry version of my cherub persona.. And I thought that a house cat really suited my personality.
So this is Sumi's Feral form, I hope you like it!
Art&Character@Me
So this is Sumi's Feral form, I hope you like it!
Art&Character@Me
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Gender Any
Size 1280 x 1067px
File Size 69.5 kB
Of course! There are times when an artist really doesn't want critique on a particular piece, so I try to be sensitive to that.
The hind end of your cat there is closer to rat anatomy. I'm not sure if that was intentional, but instead of having it curve outward like that if you look at a photo of a cat sitting the butt curves down. I'm not sure if I described it well, but here's a photo reference of what I mean. :)
http://thumbs.dreamstime.com/thumbl.....2060nSN4A6.jpg
Other than the mild anatomy issue of the hind end the image looks great!
The hind end of your cat there is closer to rat anatomy. I'm not sure if that was intentional, but instead of having it curve outward like that if you look at a photo of a cat sitting the butt curves down. I'm not sure if I described it well, but here's a photo reference of what I mean. :)
http://thumbs.dreamstime.com/thumbl.....2060nSN4A6.jpg
Other than the mild anatomy issue of the hind end the image looks great!
http://katje.net/files/vision/vishnu_normal.jpg This is the reference I used..
I'm not sure if I understand exactly what you are saying, but maybe this one is closer?
She is a Modern Siamese cat, and unlike the tradition, they are VERY thin and have skinny, whip-like tails. Their anatomy is different than most cats...
But, perhaps I'm just not seeing what you are saying?
I'm not sure if I understand exactly what you are saying, but maybe this one is closer?
She is a Modern Siamese cat, and unlike the tradition, they are VERY thin and have skinny, whip-like tails. Their anatomy is different than most cats...
But, perhaps I'm just not seeing what you are saying?
I'm so sorry about the long delay - I injured myself (like a moron) and then was out of town.
My primary issue is right where the tail connects to the back. It should be a sharper angle rather than a tapered slope that makes the butt area look more like a rat's. It isn't the tail itself (the tail is just fine - perfect for that breed!), it's where it joins the body. I had a sketch that illustrated my idea somewhere, but I lost it in the shuffle. My apologies!
My primary issue is right where the tail connects to the back. It should be a sharper angle rather than a tapered slope that makes the butt area look more like a rat's. It isn't the tail itself (the tail is just fine - perfect for that breed!), it's where it joins the body. I had a sketch that illustrated my idea somewhere, but I lost it in the shuffle. My apologies!
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