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ok here goes PART 1.
PART 1:an unlikely meeting
a badly injured mew2 (Axel) was wandering around in search 4 a place 2 heal and rest when his eye caught a pitcular silver cave."I guess I'll rest in that cave 4 a day or 2 so I can let my injuries heal".he wanders over 2 the cave entrance and goes inside."maybe if I take a quick nap I'll feel better" he said passing out.little did he realise that the cave's inhabinant a female Lugia (Tidal) was arriving home.she walks up 2 the cave and sees Axel the mew2 sleeping."hey wats this mew2 doing in my cave?" she said,she looks closely and discovers that he's hurt."oh my he's hurt I better get him a bed and some bandages.she places Axel on a straw bed and bandages his wounds,"now I w8 4 him 2 wake".a hour passes and Axel wakes "huh? where am I?" he asks,"yur @ my cave,u were badley hurt so I bandaged up yur wonds" she said."hey who r u?" he asks "I am Tidal and u r?" she asks,"I'm Axel" he replied."well pleasure 2 meet u Axel" she said,"hey Tidal how long will I b here?" he asks,"juding by yur injuries I'd say 2 weeks minimal" she replied,"ok and thank u 4 yur hospitality" he said,"yur welcome" she said."I'm gonna get some rest now" he said,"okay Axel if u need anything just call me ok?" she said,"ok" he siad falling asleep.Tidal heads 2 a back room and closes the door in side the room is a crib designed specificaly 4 lugia's a changing table and a small Lugia plush.Tidal diapers herself puts her paci in her mouth,grabs her plush and gets in her crib."I'll tell him about this later" she thought going 2 sleep.
END OF PART 1
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ok here goes PART 1.
PART 1:an unlikely meeting
a badly injured mew2 (Axel) was wandering around in search 4 a place 2 heal and rest when his eye caught a pitcular silver cave."I guess I'll rest in that cave 4 a day or 2 so I can let my injuries heal".he wanders over 2 the cave entrance and goes inside."maybe if I take a quick nap I'll feel better" he said passing out.little did he realise that the cave's inhabinant a female Lugia (Tidal) was arriving home.she walks up 2 the cave and sees Axel the mew2 sleeping."hey wats this mew2 doing in my cave?" she said,she looks closely and discovers that he's hurt."oh my he's hurt I better get him a bed and some bandages.she places Axel on a straw bed and bandages his wounds,"now I w8 4 him 2 wake".a hour passes and Axel wakes "huh? where am I?" he asks,"yur @ my cave,u were badley hurt so I bandaged up yur wonds" she said."hey who r u?" he asks "I am Tidal and u r?" she asks,"I'm Axel" he replied."well pleasure 2 meet u Axel" she said,"hey Tidal how long will I b here?" he asks,"juding by yur injuries I'd say 2 weeks minimal" she replied,"ok and thank u 4 yur hospitality" he said,"yur welcome" she said."I'm gonna get some rest now" he said,"okay Axel if u need anything just call me ok?" she said,"ok" he siad falling asleep.Tidal heads 2 a back room and closes the door in side the room is a crib designed specificaly 4 lugia's a changing table and a small Lugia plush.Tidal diapers herself puts her paci in her mouth,grabs her plush and gets in her crib."I'll tell him about this later" she thought going 2 sleep.
END OF PART 1
A story i posted on a pkmn/digimon forum
Category Story / Pokemon
Species Unspecified / Any
Gender Any
Size 50 x 50px
Not bad,But It might wanna be grammr checked.
Lugia and Mewtwo thourgh out the entire thing,and When some one starts speaking,It begins with a Capital letter
Eg:
"Moltres....It can't be!"
As oppsed to
"moltres....it cant be!"
But thats all I have to say.
Lugia and Mewtwo thourgh out the entire thing,and When some one starts speaking,It begins with a Capital letter
Eg:
"Moltres....It can't be!"
As oppsed to
"moltres....it cant be!"
But thats all I have to say.
*Damn,I ment Lugia and Mewtwo should have captial letters,as they are the names of things,and Mewtwo should be Mewtwo,not Mew2.
I know that,keep in mind this was on the forum before it was here,i simply transfered it here
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