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More old stuff since i havn't written anything worth uploading recently.
I did a few song writes under the idea of "listen once to get an idea. Listen a second time to write it. listen the third time to finish it."
So these are very short. But they're, cute; and they have more Daniel! because i'm a scrublord <3
As always, constructive criticism is appreciated.
song was: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nIjVuRTm-dc
Rain loudly pattered against the window, a single bolt of lightning struck in the far distance without causing a sound. Rook sighed, and shook his head softly, before returning his gaze to inky blackness that was his living room during a power outage. Illuminated only by the cellphone that rested on the coffee table. The battery quickly dwindling, without a word from anyone messaging him. A painful sense of loneliness ached through him until he finally stood up, searching for a candle to replace the dyeing phone. Every second felt painful. Not only from the loneliness, but he could feel the dark creeping closer. His secret fear of the dark making his heart rate pick up quickly.
Finally he stumbled across a candle; chocolate scented. He hated using the mood candles for this, but the power warning popping up on his phone again quickly changed his mind.
Seconds after it got lit, the phone went quiet. Further forcing the empty feeling into his chest.
Rook sighed loudly, before once again going to the living room window. He opened the blinds to stare at the rain again, but was caught off guard by a face that wasn't there before. Rook lept out of his skin, heart beating rapidly until he processed that the face outside the window, was Daniel. Holding his hands to make a heart shape.
Rook bolted to the door, ripping it open, half angry half relieved "What are you doing here!?" He yelled
The wolf smiled as he approached the door, literally soaking wet from standing in the rain "i knew you were afraid of the dark, so when you said your power went out.. I rushed over"
A soft pink blush went across Rook's cheeks, as he put his arms around the wolf, and lightly pressed their lips together, not caring about how wet he was.
"Love you.. You crazy wolf."
I did a few song writes under the idea of "listen once to get an idea. Listen a second time to write it. listen the third time to finish it."
So these are very short. But they're, cute; and they have more Daniel! because i'm a scrublord <3
As always, constructive criticism is appreciated.
song was: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nIjVuRTm-dc
Rain loudly pattered against the window, a single bolt of lightning struck in the far distance without causing a sound. Rook sighed, and shook his head softly, before returning his gaze to inky blackness that was his living room during a power outage. Illuminated only by the cellphone that rested on the coffee table. The battery quickly dwindling, without a word from anyone messaging him. A painful sense of loneliness ached through him until he finally stood up, searching for a candle to replace the dyeing phone. Every second felt painful. Not only from the loneliness, but he could feel the dark creeping closer. His secret fear of the dark making his heart rate pick up quickly.
Finally he stumbled across a candle; chocolate scented. He hated using the mood candles for this, but the power warning popping up on his phone again quickly changed his mind.
Seconds after it got lit, the phone went quiet. Further forcing the empty feeling into his chest.
Rook sighed loudly, before once again going to the living room window. He opened the blinds to stare at the rain again, but was caught off guard by a face that wasn't there before. Rook lept out of his skin, heart beating rapidly until he processed that the face outside the window, was Daniel. Holding his hands to make a heart shape.
Rook bolted to the door, ripping it open, half angry half relieved "What are you doing here!?" He yelled
The wolf smiled as he approached the door, literally soaking wet from standing in the rain "i knew you were afraid of the dark, so when you said your power went out.. I rushed over"
A soft pink blush went across Rook's cheeks, as he put his arms around the wolf, and lightly pressed their lips together, not caring about how wet he was.
"Love you.. You crazy wolf."
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really good, i get that feeling of "awwww such cute!" followed by my heart warming, the only thing i would say is that the part with daniel has his face at the window with his hands in a heart seems corny, would be cuter if he waved first then raised his paws in a heart. and rook running should have mentions of him tripping over random shit to really emphasize that he was running with a flurry of emotions, add more life to the scene, but you did kind of have a time limit so i cant blame you too much
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