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Ah, so the first story that I'll be presenting in segments. I plan for it to have multi-faceted expansion, Muscle, Fat, and maybe even some Macro. Ultimately the title (and the theme I placed it under) gives away the end result, but I aim to please on all sides. This is just a set-up for what will occur immediately into the next few parts, so no growth or expansion just yet, but I hope for those who actually read this part will find it intriguing enough to follow. Hooray for plot!
Enjoy. =3
Enjoy. =3
Category Story / Fat Furs
Species Tiger
Gender Male
Size 50 x 50px
Thanks! But now I need to find some stamp remover to get this ink off of my forehead! =P
Ink? Sorry, but it's PERMANENT!
...As long as you don't rub it off with a wet paper towel... >_>
...As long as you don't rub it off with a wet paper towel... >_>
Very solid narration, with a clear voice and good characterization. It does seem like things will be pretty straight forward, but the narration makes that okay.
Looks like some interesting things are going to happen to Kris quite soon...^^
Looks like some interesting things are going to happen to Kris quite soon...^^
Yes indeed. And I plan to slow the narration down a bit, and apply more description and some emotion to the upcoming parts. I kind of whipped this one up fairly quickly as set up so I could dive into the real meat of the story head-on. Glad to see it's well recieved, though! =3
So far this has me interesting. Wonder what's going to happen next?
Ugh! I can't type today.
"So far this has me interested. I wonder what's going to happen next.
"So far this has me interested. I wonder what's going to happen next.
In the first sentence, you had the period like this: "...manufacturing plant .It seems..." Just the spacing was weird :S
Anyway though, I can tell I'm going to like it :3
...Why does everyone write shorter parts than I do, though? xD
Anyway though, I can tell I'm going to like it :3
...Why does everyone write shorter parts than I do, though? xD
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