Nice!

thank you so very much Walt...

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It works great with the musical prompt.

*smiles...

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I could never stand it when films or video games used the 'fring/shing' sound effect when a blade is drawn, it would just render bladed weapons pointless in stealth scenarios. Thank goodness such isn't the case in reality.

Meanwhile, suppressors on firearms suffer from the opposite in fiction (being shown as silent, when the real thing is louder than if the suppressor wasn't attached.)

This was a fine read, Vixyy. It suits the song perfectly...

Thank you so very much... all of what you've mentioned are some of my bugaboos as well...

thanks for the read Hania...

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Obviously, she doesn't play nice.

Bunners

*winks at the Hare... nope...

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He's lucky he didn't lose a foot.

Bunners

*smiles so very big...

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the Wilhelm scream?

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Beautiful...and a little creepy!

I enjoyed it.

wow... I think that's the first creepy I ever managed - truthfully!!!!

thanks Lu...

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I have now learned what a mizmar is, and I think that's perfect for the scene. I'll remember to stick away from vixens in alley ways!

*laughs... they do spell trouble...

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You certainly come up with the most arcane terminology in some of your stories. It's makes them all the more interesting. Where did you find the silhouette? It would make a great desktop.

*chuckles... I found one that was close on google image and then used MS paint to add the ears. I lover that little program. I've been working on an image of the HMS Lacis in spare moments at work since I could not find a drawing of an L class. It's a bit like 'paint by the numbers' but it is very calming.

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That was definitely a match for the music. And as Hania noted, it's nice when someone pays attention to how reality works in their fiction.

I have always been a stickler having things right in the movies I watch... remember 'Man From Uncle'? They had just gotten control of the little business jet and told the tower they were almost out of fuel - flash to the fuel indicator and it looks like it was pulled from a Model T Ford F dash dash E, and the needle is on E.

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