Scolipede Snacktime ! Pokemon Vore Audio
A commission for the lovely asae ! I had a lot of fun with this one!
Also, special thanks to Jeschke for the 'Noodlerama' audio assets! I used them to make some Neat effects!
Here's the transcript! (Although I recommend maybe listening to it without it! I'm pretty proud of myself for conveying a clear image of the entire scene :>)
0:00 - 0:12 ; You're out on a hike, enjoying the fall air as leaves crunch beneath your feet, bugs chirping from the nearby brush, whistling to yourself as you engage on your trek.
0:12 - 0:19 ; You're jolted out of your walk when you hear something flying through the air, and turn just in time to see a thick white string shoot towards you! It wraps around your torso with ease, tightening as you fall against the soft layer of leaves.
0:19 - 0:28 ; Your attacker steps out from behind a tree, and the Scolipede walks towards you, chittering to itself. Reaching a claw forward, it pulls at its String Shot, and chirps in a triumphant glee! It certainly doesn't seem violent, just... curious?
0:28 - 0:36 ; ...Or, maybe not? A tongue lulls out, giving you large, wet licks across your face, gentle and teasing, before its beak opens wide, and pulls you in! It lets you simply lie against its tongue before you feel it grasp your waist, and shove you into its throat!
0:36 - 0:57; Between strong, noisy undulations of peristalsis, the world around you gurgles, with slimy walls pressing against you! It's... oddly not that scary. You feel weirdly comforted by the whole ordeal as the Scolipede carefully eases you down its throat with gentle pushes, until you are pushes through a pucker, and into its stomach!
1:00 - onward ; Without the movement of the throat, it's quieter and more comfortable in the Scolipede's stomach, as you pool into the damp chamber. There doesn't seem to be an absence of air, and, with your weight, it hands much like a hammock! The chamber gurgles much more with you in it, and, as you settle inside the bug Pokemon, it seems to be just as happy and kind to you as you are to it! You feel it rub against its underbelly, patting the soft scales with affectionate taps as you find yourself lulled to sleep by the bodily processes of your host, each of you sated, warm, and comforted in the autumn afternoon...
Also, special thanks to Jeschke for the 'Noodlerama' audio assets! I used them to make some Neat effects!
Here's the transcript! (Although I recommend maybe listening to it without it! I'm pretty proud of myself for conveying a clear image of the entire scene :>)
0:00 - 0:12 ; You're out on a hike, enjoying the fall air as leaves crunch beneath your feet, bugs chirping from the nearby brush, whistling to yourself as you engage on your trek.
0:12 - 0:19 ; You're jolted out of your walk when you hear something flying through the air, and turn just in time to see a thick white string shoot towards you! It wraps around your torso with ease, tightening as you fall against the soft layer of leaves.
0:19 - 0:28 ; Your attacker steps out from behind a tree, and the Scolipede walks towards you, chittering to itself. Reaching a claw forward, it pulls at its String Shot, and chirps in a triumphant glee! It certainly doesn't seem violent, just... curious?
0:28 - 0:36 ; ...Or, maybe not? A tongue lulls out, giving you large, wet licks across your face, gentle and teasing, before its beak opens wide, and pulls you in! It lets you simply lie against its tongue before you feel it grasp your waist, and shove you into its throat!
0:36 - 0:57; Between strong, noisy undulations of peristalsis, the world around you gurgles, with slimy walls pressing against you! It's... oddly not that scary. You feel weirdly comforted by the whole ordeal as the Scolipede carefully eases you down its throat with gentle pushes, until you are pushes through a pucker, and into its stomach!
1:00 - onward ; Without the movement of the throat, it's quieter and more comfortable in the Scolipede's stomach, as you pool into the damp chamber. There doesn't seem to be an absence of air, and, with your weight, it hands much like a hammock! The chamber gurgles much more with you in it, and, as you settle inside the bug Pokemon, it seems to be just as happy and kind to you as you are to it! You feel it rub against its underbelly, patting the soft scales with affectionate taps as you find yourself lulled to sleep by the bodily processes of your host, each of you sated, warm, and comforted in the autumn afternoon...
Category Music / All
Species Pokemon
Gender Any
Size 120 x 120px
Ooh, that's even better than I expected. The ONLY criticism I have (not as the commissioner but in general) is that the whip of the stringshot was a bit too sharp, might be better to have it rapidly fade in rather than sound like it's RIGHT there immediately.
Other that little tidbit it's amazing.
Other that little tidbit it's amazing.
You're definitely getting better, but don't give up on learning! I see a lot of people who just get complacent with their creations because they gain a following of people who see their potential to improve, and they take that as "I must be doing everything right" and just stop learning. I think it's very good, but I do agree with asae that the spacial audio in your pieces in general could be tweaked a bit to sound like things have a direction (such as the grass being under you, or the string shot being behind you and such). I can't say how you go about changing those things though because I've only tried doing an audio once with a free program that doesn't have the ability of playing with surround sound unfortunately, so I'm not much help there :/ But I can at least tell you what I think is good and what could be done better~!
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