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The rain is calming, yes it may seem dreadful for you, but for me, its calming. There’s just something different about the feeling of rain, against my soft, delicate skin. If it weren’t for the fact of receiving illness, I would sit in that soothing, damp heaven all day.
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The rain is calming, yes it may seem dreadful for you, but for me, its calming. There’s just something different about the feeling of rain, against my soft, delicate skin. If it weren’t for the fact of receiving illness, I would sit in that soothing, damp heaven all day.
This is my first attempt at trying to make any type of poetry, please if you’d like to, give any feedback, because I want to try to make more poetry for this account! :)
Category Poetry / Miscellaneous
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Honestly, I like it although I'm not a big poetry reader. Short but meaningful and easy to understand (I struggle with most poems.) The only thing that I would change is just the aesthetics. Maybe dividing it into three lines would make it look better, but that's up to you.
Also, adding some sort of picture, even stock pictures, would be a great way to catch someone's attention.
Also, adding some sort of picture, even stock pictures, would be a great way to catch someone's attention.
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