[Collab Comm] Burn's Sergal Family Pages 1/5
Special Collab Sketch Page Commission for Burned_Out, thank you!
This is the first page of the five orders purchased by Burn, to feature biographies and slices of the life of his Sergal family. To work on the five orders, I got super-rich, juicy, exciting, and interesting details of significant members of the Sergal family fully written by the commissioner, in order to create pages out of both the character information and Vilous lore.
Actually, it was just the first attempt for me that working on full-scaled character lore that even has a storyline, in order to bring off appropriate visual design for it. So, I decided to ask help from my dear partner and brother and one of the Vilous official Lore Masters Coju to go without wrong, while also relying on him to read and understand a quite amount of English text correctly.
This artwork is based off of Coju's initial ideas and sketches under his perfect understanding of both the original concepts provided by the character owner and canon-compliant design for the official Vilous lore! Thusly, this piece is a purely collaborative effort between me and him!
This page is featuring Baal the Eastern Sergal, his young time, when he was spending time in a rural mountain village in the Lyvank Mountains!
The upper right shot is about when he was a hunter, he's furiously tearing up his prey Dondoko with his knives at a Talyxian forest at the foot of Mt Lyvank! (Note that these Talyxian forests are located at just the FOOT area of Mt Lyvank, the Mountain itself is occupied by the Eltus zone and does not count as a Talyxian biome area like what the artwork displays.)
The bottom right shot is about when he began learning martial arts, he is confronting a violent Agudner ruffian with his martial arts style!
And the left shot, it's about when he became a prize-fighter to win money and help support his village! In a small and simple arena of the mountain village, he is accepting a fight from new challengers! To prove that he became a prize-fighter, he is wearing a Judo-like belt that displays fresh green, a representative of Eltus soul's color, and some silver badges modeled after the precious Eltus plant's leaves! They are medals from his local tournament!
This artwork reflects a quite lot of Reono-specific traits. As Reono people especially men tend to be pretty wild, rough, and macho in both appearance and behavior, I tried to express these elements in this piece as much as possible. His martial arts styles and clothes on the left, they were inspired by Japanese traditional martial arts such as Judo and Karate, and Chinese martial arts such as Kung fu and Tai chi!
Again but as what should not be forgotten, special thanks to Coju for the achievement of this, I could never achieve this without his help in both concept sketching and lore-supportive tips!
Now there are still 4 pages for Burn's Sergal family remaining, but, I'd like to space the uploads some, to avoid "shotgun spam" of submissions.
We hope you enjoy the pages~! Thank you for your support and patronage!
Art by me and Coju
Character belongs to Burned_Out
English Translation and Lore Correction Help by Coju
The fictional species belong to the world of Vilous created by Mick39 and Kiki-UMA
This is the first page of the five orders purchased by Burn, to feature biographies and slices of the life of his Sergal family. To work on the five orders, I got super-rich, juicy, exciting, and interesting details of significant members of the Sergal family fully written by the commissioner, in order to create pages out of both the character information and Vilous lore.
Actually, it was just the first attempt for me that working on full-scaled character lore that even has a storyline, in order to bring off appropriate visual design for it. So, I decided to ask help from my dear partner and brother and one of the Vilous official Lore Masters Coju to go without wrong, while also relying on him to read and understand a quite amount of English text correctly.
This artwork is based off of Coju's initial ideas and sketches under his perfect understanding of both the original concepts provided by the character owner and canon-compliant design for the official Vilous lore! Thusly, this piece is a purely collaborative effort between me and him!
📖What the Artwork Tells📖
This page is featuring Baal the Eastern Sergal, his young time, when he was spending time in a rural mountain village in the Lyvank Mountains!
The upper right shot is about when he was a hunter, he's furiously tearing up his prey Dondoko with his knives at a Talyxian forest at the foot of Mt Lyvank! (Note that these Talyxian forests are located at just the FOOT area of Mt Lyvank, the Mountain itself is occupied by the Eltus zone and does not count as a Talyxian biome area like what the artwork displays.)
The bottom right shot is about when he began learning martial arts, he is confronting a violent Agudner ruffian with his martial arts style!
And the left shot, it's about when he became a prize-fighter to win money and help support his village! In a small and simple arena of the mountain village, he is accepting a fight from new challengers! To prove that he became a prize-fighter, he is wearing a Judo-like belt that displays fresh green, a representative of Eltus soul's color, and some silver badges modeled after the precious Eltus plant's leaves! They are medals from his local tournament!
This artwork reflects a quite lot of Reono-specific traits. As Reono people especially men tend to be pretty wild, rough, and macho in both appearance and behavior, I tried to express these elements in this piece as much as possible. His martial arts styles and clothes on the left, they were inspired by Japanese traditional martial arts such as Judo and Karate, and Chinese martial arts such as Kung fu and Tai chi!
🌟 Vilous Lore-Supportive TIPS 🌟
-Dondoko's blood color?
Their bodies consist of red muscular systems, belt-shaped bones, gray reproductive organs, and digestive organs. While they have gray blood as many Talyxian organisms do, a fraction of their body parts and organs contain bodily fluids in colors of white or orange as well.-Scary pink forest!
Yes! These colors are common hues of Talyxian forest looks like. Especially for those of Reono, plants in Talyxian biome areas are characterized by a more meaty and grotesque appearance. These forests in Reono can be said in an analogy of "internal organs just covered by a thin skin", it means Reono people are living in a location where always borders on being dangerous of toxic and thick Talyxian forest with no or a little barrier between people's habitation and these forests.Again but as what should not be forgotten, special thanks to Coju for the achievement of this, I could never achieve this without his help in both concept sketching and lore-supportive tips!
Now there are still 4 pages for Burn's Sergal family remaining, but, I'd like to space the uploads some, to avoid "shotgun spam" of submissions.
We hope you enjoy the pages~! Thank you for your support and patronage!
Art by me and Coju
Character belongs to Burned_Out
English Translation and Lore Correction Help by Coju
The fictional species belong to the world of Vilous created by Mick39 and Kiki-UMA
Category Artwork (Digital) / Anime
Species Sergal
Gender Male
Size 1273 x 1040px
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