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When it comes to business, competition is a part of the natural order. But, something supernatural this way comes, threatening not just Mr. Ping's Noodle Restaurant, but the entire Valley of Peace. And it is up to Po to figure out a way to save his friends, his family, and the villagers from the insidious monster known as Jìngsài who threatens to devour the entire village... after offering them food at very reasonable prices, of course. With a legacy of Noodles and Kung Fu on his side, does the Dragon Warrior have the stomach for this great task?
Kung Fu Panda is © Dreamworks.
Word Count: 11242
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.:Rated general for:.
>Overeating
>WG
>>Fat
>>Big Fat
>>Barely Mobile
Kung Fu Panda is © Dreamworks.
Word Count: 11242
If you enjoyed the story, feel free to comment and fave, I'd really appreciate it.
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Category Story / Fat Furs
Species Unspecified / Any
Gender Multiple characters
Size 120 x 120px
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Fuck that was a delicious read. Good use of Po's inherent gluttony to battle a rather good idea for an enemy. I think you handled the dialogue and character personalities well. Everyone felt like they should. Po's gaining and overall size was sexy stuff though, very fitting for him and his body type. That bit about "a foot of his crack" hanging out was very, very good.
I find the characters were the best part tbh; especially writing for Ping. I felt maybe Tigress and Shifu were a bit flat, but they were bit parts anyways lol! Fun thing too, it was actually half a foot of crack originally, but I changed it to a foot during proof-reading for that real DAYUM THAT'S A HUGE ASS! impact.
Yet another well done story from you, and I did enjoy seeing someone getting their just deserts with a fitting end. I won't spoil too much but it's nice to see a good bit 9f size description over certain parts like the gut as wepl!!
Thank you. I find the description to be very important actually, so I'm really glad it was picked up on. I personally like to give some scale, but also some wwiggle room as well to let people imagine their ideal looks.
Hey, this was fun! You nailed the tone and voices, and I always love a good happy ending. Diets for everyone, haha.
Funny thing actually, my BF too mentioned he could hear the characters' voices when reading the dialogue too.
A fun read, and definitely in-keeping with the show! A very inventive idea, and great work on the dialogue and descriptions, too. Thanks for sharing this with us! :)
That was definitely my goal to feel like this could fit right in with the show, as if it could be it's own episode. The dialogue too was my favourite, especially doing Ping's dialogue.
Hahah, that was definitely a fun read! Kind of felt like I was actually watching an episode, if that makes sense! This was amazing!
Makes perfect sense cause that's what I was aiming for: To try and capture the feel of the show/movies and let readers feel like this could be a very possible thing in the series.
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