My Rebel Alliance Commando.. his secret is.. that he is a Jedi Survivor of Order 66.. a Jedi Master no less..
Name: Talun (Pronounced Talon) Stormclaw
Nicknames/Aliases/Titles: Storm Leader, Storm, Jedi, Master, Rebel, Pilot, Sparrow Leader, General, Birdbrain
Age: 46 (As of 0 BBY)
Species: Rishii
Homeworld: Rishi
Height: 5’11”
Weight: 195Ibs
Languages: Basic, Rishii, Wookie, Binary, Ryl, Huttese,Trandoshan, Auqalish
Distinctions: Red orange and blue colored feathers and fur. Mechanics goggles on his head. Scar above and below his left eye from a duel with General Grievous on Felucia. Gifts a feather as a symbol of friendship.
Weapons: DH-17 Blaster Pistol, A280 Blaster Rifle, E-17d Sniper Rifle,Single blade Saber (Blue/Green crystal) Smoke Grenades, Thermal Detonators, Double-Bladed Lightsaber that can detach at the middle..(Purple crystals)
Armor: specialised commando armor with holo visor. Necklace of four Kyber Crystals around his neck. ((now 1 Kyber crystal)) for the Armor think of Rahm Kota in Force Unleashed 2, Also has a flight suit under his armor.
Companion: His Trusty Red and Dark Blue R2 Astromech nicknamed Hawk. (Dome Shaped head) Often refers to Talun as ‘Bird Brain’, Holds all his battle strategies in his memory banks. Has old pre war security codes and early imperial tactics taken from onboard an Imperial cruiser when he was on the run. A very spunky and adventurous yet cautious little droid.
Traits: Loyal friend, Dedicated to the Rebellion, Good mechanic, Strategist, Expert Pilot.
Hobbies: Mechanics, Flying, Reading, Sabaac, Rebuilding the Jedi Order
Rival(s): Ienah (was part of the Jedi team that imprisoned her during the clone wars when she fell to the Dark Side.), Darth Ziara (Formerly the Jedi Knight known as Tasia Koor.)
Phrases They Live by: “The costs of war can never be truly accounted for.” “A wise leader knows when to follow.” “The most dangerous beast is the beast within.” “Where there’s a will, there’s a way.” “Evil is not born, it is taught.” “Adaptation is the key to survival.” “Who a person truly is cannot be seen with the eye.” “The strong survive, the noble overcome.” “Who we are never changes, who we think we are does.” “A fallen enemy may rise again, but the reconciled one is truly vanquished.” “The enemy of my enemy is my friend.” “Never give up hope, no matter how dark things seem
((For Force Power Information See Force Sheet))
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet.....9j9BYVaCM/edit
Story: Born on Rishi during the days of peace of the Republic, Talun was soon recognised as a gifted force Sensitive by members of his tribe who contacted the Jedi order requesting that they take him in as it was rare for a Rishii to be a Jedi and they were all very proud of him. Talun was brought to the temple around the age of 5 and soon he was put through rigorous training and testing for about 8 years which is when he received his lightsaber crystal in the caves of Ilum. He fashioned a hilt designed after Obi-wan Kenobi's original design with some modification and soon became very proficient in the use of the saber as well as in the use of blasters which was uncommon for a jedi. He was also a fairly decent mechanic. Trained under Mace Windu for a time and soon became an expert swordsman and strategist before advancing to knighthood. He trained Dozens of students in wilderness survival training and took on 2 padawans before the time of the Clone Wars.
During the Clone Wars he served with the 2nd Platoon and fought with the famed Talon Squad.. His own personal troopers that he had saved on many occasions. Taking part in one of the early battles of Saleucami as a Knight he kept his soldiers together in face of overwhelming odds alongside his two padawans and outmanned and outgunned he kept his unit together using guerilla tactics against the overwhelming might of the seperatist army. After several weeks had passed, Talun and his men were finally given reinforcements from General Kenobi’s 212th attack battalion and were recalled to Coruscant for some rest. After returning to Coruscant he was shortly summoned to the Council Chambers in the Jedi Temple where he was presented with the rank of Master and his padawans given the rank of Knight for their service and valor and dedication to peace on Saleucami (not to mention the many Trials they were presented with). Shortly after he was summoned to the Senate chambers where he was presented with the Medal of Bravery for his heroism and dedication to the Republic on the planet of Saleucami.
The war continued to progress with no end in sight. About halfway through the war he was requested to watch over a Jedi knight named Ienah who displayed many dark side habits. He had no choice in the end but to subdue her and bring her back to the temple for rehabilitation even though it pained him to do this to a Knight he had to respect the Will of the Council and statutes that the Jedi followed. As the war neared its bloody end Master Stormclaw was fighting on Mygeeto with Ki-adi-Mundi and the Fourth Outer Rim Army alongside his former Padawans and their Padawans when Order 66 was issued… He watched in horror as his friend Mundi was gunned down. Followed by his former padawans…Talon squad gunned them down without a second thought but when they came to fire on their leader... Sergeant Green told the troops to stand down in honor of the act of self sacrifice Stormclaw had done for them on Saleucami all those years ago.. Using this time to mount an escape he did so after retrieving the lightsabers of the fallen before the inhibitor chips started to override Green’s mind and cause him to turn on his friend. He made his way to the landing pad where his Eta-2 starfighter was docked with his R2 astromech ‘Hawk’ in its droid socket. Quickly he hopped into it and took fire from clone anti-air artillery… Taking evasive maneuvers, he employed exceptional piloting skills until he made it to orbit where he had to dodge the Republic ships gunfire and Separatist gunfire until he found a Hyperspace ring and the jedi fled into hiding, escaping the chaos, and traveled to Rishi for a time..crashing his fighter into the swamps of the jungle planet and making a solitary life with his astromech.
About 2 years passed in his solitude before Imperial ships showed up to declare Rishi was now part of the Empire. Seeing that Rishi was no longer safe he decided it was time to leave. He hopped a flight on board a freighter bound for Alderaan. He soon debarked the freighter with his Astromech and ran into Senator Bail Organa knowing he had close ties to the jedi in the past... Familiar with the Senator’s ties to the Jedi he pleaded for Sanctuary which was granted. He lived in peace on the Beautiful planet for about 4 years until he could sit idle no longer and was successfully smuggled towards the small collection of Rebel Cells growing across the Galaxy; he was now part of the Rebel Alliance.
Personally responsible for the formation of Storm Squadron, a team of 12 pilots that fly X-wings.
Formed The Sparrows on Naboo- Surviving members of the Jedi team that imprisoned dark jedi knight Ienah. Appointed Oak as Commander unless he is around. A rather resourceful Rebel cell.
Having participated in many battles of the Clone Wars.. Talun is a seasoned veteran with a mind for combat strategy and is a driven member of the Rebel Alliance. He is an Expert Pilot and Leader. He will not hesitate to put his life on the line for the safety of his fellow rebels or Jedi survivors as long as it means the end of the Galactic Empire.
He has constructed 2 sabers. The first one is a dualsaber. With it he vows that nobody will be hurt again for his actions. This Saber is sort of inspired by his former Master Mace Windu. He believes that he is living in the shadow of his former Master. Both Saber crystals are Purple. The second is a single blade dualphase saber with a Blue crystal showing his dedication to the Jedi.
Notable Clone Wars Battles Participated in include: Geonosis Invasion 1(Ground) & 2 (Air&Ground), Saleucami initial invasion (Ground), Mygeeto (Space & Ground), Anaxes (Space), Rishi (Ground & Space), Christophsis blockade (advisor), Umbara (Space), Felucia 3rd battle (Recon), Ryloth (Ground) Bothawui (Recon), Dorin (Space) Kamino (Advisor), 2nd battle of Felucia (Recon).
Name: Talun (Pronounced Talon) Stormclaw
Nicknames/Aliases/Titles: Storm Leader, Storm, Jedi, Master, Rebel, Pilot, Sparrow Leader, General, Birdbrain
Age: 46 (As of 0 BBY)
Species: Rishii
Homeworld: Rishi
Height: 5’11”
Weight: 195Ibs
Languages: Basic, Rishii, Wookie, Binary, Ryl, Huttese,Trandoshan, Auqalish
Distinctions: Red orange and blue colored feathers and fur. Mechanics goggles on his head. Scar above and below his left eye from a duel with General Grievous on Felucia. Gifts a feather as a symbol of friendship.
Weapons: DH-17 Blaster Pistol, A280 Blaster Rifle, E-17d Sniper Rifle,Single blade Saber (Blue/Green crystal) Smoke Grenades, Thermal Detonators, Double-Bladed Lightsaber that can detach at the middle..(Purple crystals)
Armor: specialised commando armor with holo visor. Necklace of four Kyber Crystals around his neck. ((now 1 Kyber crystal)) for the Armor think of Rahm Kota in Force Unleashed 2, Also has a flight suit under his armor.
Companion: His Trusty Red and Dark Blue R2 Astromech nicknamed Hawk. (Dome Shaped head) Often refers to Talun as ‘Bird Brain’, Holds all his battle strategies in his memory banks. Has old pre war security codes and early imperial tactics taken from onboard an Imperial cruiser when he was on the run. A very spunky and adventurous yet cautious little droid.
Traits: Loyal friend, Dedicated to the Rebellion, Good mechanic, Strategist, Expert Pilot.
Hobbies: Mechanics, Flying, Reading, Sabaac, Rebuilding the Jedi Order
Rival(s): Ienah (was part of the Jedi team that imprisoned her during the clone wars when she fell to the Dark Side.), Darth Ziara (Formerly the Jedi Knight known as Tasia Koor.)
Phrases They Live by: “The costs of war can never be truly accounted for.” “A wise leader knows when to follow.” “The most dangerous beast is the beast within.” “Where there’s a will, there’s a way.” “Evil is not born, it is taught.” “Adaptation is the key to survival.” “Who a person truly is cannot be seen with the eye.” “The strong survive, the noble overcome.” “Who we are never changes, who we think we are does.” “A fallen enemy may rise again, but the reconciled one is truly vanquished.” “The enemy of my enemy is my friend.” “Never give up hope, no matter how dark things seem
((For Force Power Information See Force Sheet))
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet.....9j9BYVaCM/edit
Story: Born on Rishi during the days of peace of the Republic, Talun was soon recognised as a gifted force Sensitive by members of his tribe who contacted the Jedi order requesting that they take him in as it was rare for a Rishii to be a Jedi and they were all very proud of him. Talun was brought to the temple around the age of 5 and soon he was put through rigorous training and testing for about 8 years which is when he received his lightsaber crystal in the caves of Ilum. He fashioned a hilt designed after Obi-wan Kenobi's original design with some modification and soon became very proficient in the use of the saber as well as in the use of blasters which was uncommon for a jedi. He was also a fairly decent mechanic. Trained under Mace Windu for a time and soon became an expert swordsman and strategist before advancing to knighthood. He trained Dozens of students in wilderness survival training and took on 2 padawans before the time of the Clone Wars.
During the Clone Wars he served with the 2nd Platoon and fought with the famed Talon Squad.. His own personal troopers that he had saved on many occasions. Taking part in one of the early battles of Saleucami as a Knight he kept his soldiers together in face of overwhelming odds alongside his two padawans and outmanned and outgunned he kept his unit together using guerilla tactics against the overwhelming might of the seperatist army. After several weeks had passed, Talun and his men were finally given reinforcements from General Kenobi’s 212th attack battalion and were recalled to Coruscant for some rest. After returning to Coruscant he was shortly summoned to the Council Chambers in the Jedi Temple where he was presented with the rank of Master and his padawans given the rank of Knight for their service and valor and dedication to peace on Saleucami (not to mention the many Trials they were presented with). Shortly after he was summoned to the Senate chambers where he was presented with the Medal of Bravery for his heroism and dedication to the Republic on the planet of Saleucami.
The war continued to progress with no end in sight. About halfway through the war he was requested to watch over a Jedi knight named Ienah who displayed many dark side habits. He had no choice in the end but to subdue her and bring her back to the temple for rehabilitation even though it pained him to do this to a Knight he had to respect the Will of the Council and statutes that the Jedi followed. As the war neared its bloody end Master Stormclaw was fighting on Mygeeto with Ki-adi-Mundi and the Fourth Outer Rim Army alongside his former Padawans and their Padawans when Order 66 was issued… He watched in horror as his friend Mundi was gunned down. Followed by his former padawans…Talon squad gunned them down without a second thought but when they came to fire on their leader... Sergeant Green told the troops to stand down in honor of the act of self sacrifice Stormclaw had done for them on Saleucami all those years ago.. Using this time to mount an escape he did so after retrieving the lightsabers of the fallen before the inhibitor chips started to override Green’s mind and cause him to turn on his friend. He made his way to the landing pad where his Eta-2 starfighter was docked with his R2 astromech ‘Hawk’ in its droid socket. Quickly he hopped into it and took fire from clone anti-air artillery… Taking evasive maneuvers, he employed exceptional piloting skills until he made it to orbit where he had to dodge the Republic ships gunfire and Separatist gunfire until he found a Hyperspace ring and the jedi fled into hiding, escaping the chaos, and traveled to Rishi for a time..crashing his fighter into the swamps of the jungle planet and making a solitary life with his astromech.
About 2 years passed in his solitude before Imperial ships showed up to declare Rishi was now part of the Empire. Seeing that Rishi was no longer safe he decided it was time to leave. He hopped a flight on board a freighter bound for Alderaan. He soon debarked the freighter with his Astromech and ran into Senator Bail Organa knowing he had close ties to the jedi in the past... Familiar with the Senator’s ties to the Jedi he pleaded for Sanctuary which was granted. He lived in peace on the Beautiful planet for about 4 years until he could sit idle no longer and was successfully smuggled towards the small collection of Rebel Cells growing across the Galaxy; he was now part of the Rebel Alliance.
Personally responsible for the formation of Storm Squadron, a team of 12 pilots that fly X-wings.
Formed The Sparrows on Naboo- Surviving members of the Jedi team that imprisoned dark jedi knight Ienah. Appointed Oak as Commander unless he is around. A rather resourceful Rebel cell.
Having participated in many battles of the Clone Wars.. Talun is a seasoned veteran with a mind for combat strategy and is a driven member of the Rebel Alliance. He is an Expert Pilot and Leader. He will not hesitate to put his life on the line for the safety of his fellow rebels or Jedi survivors as long as it means the end of the Galactic Empire.
He has constructed 2 sabers. The first one is a dualsaber. With it he vows that nobody will be hurt again for his actions. This Saber is sort of inspired by his former Master Mace Windu. He believes that he is living in the shadow of his former Master. Both Saber crystals are Purple. The second is a single blade dualphase saber with a Blue crystal showing his dedication to the Jedi.
Notable Clone Wars Battles Participated in include: Geonosis Invasion 1(Ground) & 2 (Air&Ground), Saleucami initial invasion (Ground), Mygeeto (Space & Ground), Anaxes (Space), Rishi (Ground & Space), Christophsis blockade (advisor), Umbara (Space), Felucia 3rd battle (Recon), Ryloth (Ground) Bothawui (Recon), Dorin (Space) Kamino (Advisor), 2nd battle of Felucia (Recon).
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Bear in mind this was my original first draft of information for the character itself.. It was for an RP server on Discord.. that sadly died out.. new iterations are always made but this was the original variant for the character that I made..
Avali!
And if a couple of images and their accompanying story are to be believed, that particular iteration of this character is a heavy wetter like myself~ I only bring that up because I don't often come across other Avali, or people with Avali characters, that are also down with being crinkly.
And if a couple of images and their accompanying story are to be believed, that particular iteration of this character is a heavy wetter like myself~ I only bring that up because I don't often come across other Avali, or people with Avali characters, that are also down with being crinkly.
same character but different iteration if you are referring to the art with Pirate Eagle.. :) now while he is an Avali i had to change the race to fit with star wars and went with the closest i could find hence the term Rishii but it all worked out :) and i love being crinkly too i just keep it out of star wars usually *for my own reasons*
Rykis is mainly based in a version of the Starbound universe with liberties taken when necessary or fun, given that my longest running RP with my best friend who plays an Avian has gone on for over five years and we have done multiple modded Starbound playthroughs together in character.
The neat thing about Rykis being an interstellar traveler with his own ship in a setting that also has magic is that he is easy to fit into other settings when I want to RP with someone but they have a character from a different fictional setting. We can just have it that through either space travel or some interdimensional gate Rykis encountered a strange planet on his travels, and beams down to study, and runs into the other person's character eventually. It is much easier to explain away my species in fantasy settings as being an explorer from a far-off land. It isn't technically untrue, after all.
If you ever feel the mood to reprise the more generally Avali form of this character, and would like having some kind of space adventure with another Avali that is sure to involve padding, let me know. It's not often I get to interact with another Avali in padding.
The neat thing about Rykis being an interstellar traveler with his own ship in a setting that also has magic is that he is easy to fit into other settings when I want to RP with someone but they have a character from a different fictional setting. We can just have it that through either space travel or some interdimensional gate Rykis encountered a strange planet on his travels, and beams down to study, and runs into the other person's character eventually. It is much easier to explain away my species in fantasy settings as being an explorer from a far-off land. It isn't technically untrue, after all.
If you ever feel the mood to reprise the more generally Avali form of this character, and would like having some kind of space adventure with another Avali that is sure to involve padding, let me know. It's not often I get to interact with another Avali in padding.
imay just have to take you up on that offer *avali chittering noises*
If you feel up to it sometime, I have Discord amd Telegram. I'm AvaliRykis on both
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