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Writing by TP (Thursday Promt)
Juuuichi and Torahiko live a happy married life. And Tora is ready to tell about one of the days he spent with his beloved bear.
Dedicated to bearlovestiger13
Juuuichi and Torahiko live a happy married life. And Tora is ready to tell about one of the days he spent with his beloved bear.
Dedicated to bearlovestiger13
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Gender Any
Size 50 x 50px
I'm put off by the format. If you intended a script, I want to know who's speaking.
Indeed, chocolate is the greatest motivator of them all! Torahiko would be well advised to wake up, so that his dark master is not left uneaten. Heh. Also, 'midnight boy' is the cutest pet nickname between a couple I've ever heard lol.
So it looks like Torahiko was well aided by Juuichi in regards to studying for his test, since he did so well on it the next day. This news is also well received by Juuichi.
Getting further into the story, it seems that the concept of academic excellence figures largely in the relationship value system between Torahiko and Juuichi. Perhaps Juuichi finds Torahiko attractive because he knows how deeply intelligent he really is. What's more, Torahiko feels that Juuichi's scholarly personality helps brings out the manifestation of his best achievements and scholastic potential.
I liked the creative use of 'crescent moon' as a descriptor for how Juuichi's muscular chest is shaped, I've never seen that used before, well done.
This was a story of a beautiful relationship that serves both parties very well. Who wouldn't want a huge, powerful bear to take them out for a night on the town, with movie nights and amusement park rides? With tasty food from your favorite restaurant? Such is the stuff dreams are made of.
A very immersive, loving tale of an admirable relationship! Well done, Wertyda456!
So it looks like Torahiko was well aided by Juuichi in regards to studying for his test, since he did so well on it the next day. This news is also well received by Juuichi.
Getting further into the story, it seems that the concept of academic excellence figures largely in the relationship value system between Torahiko and Juuichi. Perhaps Juuichi finds Torahiko attractive because he knows how deeply intelligent he really is. What's more, Torahiko feels that Juuichi's scholarly personality helps brings out the manifestation of his best achievements and scholastic potential.
I liked the creative use of 'crescent moon' as a descriptor for how Juuichi's muscular chest is shaped, I've never seen that used before, well done.
This was a story of a beautiful relationship that serves both parties very well. Who wouldn't want a huge, powerful bear to take them out for a night on the town, with movie nights and amusement park rides? With tasty food from your favorite restaurant? Such is the stuff dreams are made of.
A very immersive, loving tale of an admirable relationship! Well done, Wertyda456!
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