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The war escalates as the Decepticons attempt to capture more Mini-Cons during a major sporting event. Meanwhile, one of the Decepticons begins to question his commitment to their war effort...
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And once more, my thanks to lonegamer7 for her able assistance in editing.
Autobots appearing in both versions of this installment are Hot Shot, Blurr, Scavenger, Optimus Prime, Smokescreen, and Red Alert. Appearing in the re-edit but not the original is Jetfire.
Decepticons appearing in both versions of this installment are Starscream, Demolishor, Megatron, Thrust, and Cyclonus. Appearing in the re-edit but not the original are Straxus, Obsidian, and Tankor. Mentioned but not seen in the re-edit are Thundercracker, Skywarp, and Bludgeon.
Mini-Cons appearing in both versions are Sparkplug, Longarm, Jolt, the Race Team (Mirage, Dirt Boss, Downshift), Incinerator, Swindle, Zapmaster, and Leader-1. Appearing in the re-edit but not the original are Rollbar, Refute, Liftor, and Blackout. Mentioned but not appearing are the Street Action Team (High Wire, Grindor, Sureshock) and the Land Military Team (Wreckage, Knock-Out, Bonecrusher).
Humans appearing in both installments are Diana Masters, Bradley "Rad" White, Carlos Lopez, and Alexis Romanov. Mentioned but not appearing in either installment is Kelly Baumgartner.
This version had a number of differences from the original, mostly due to improved researching on my part. The fact that I didn't have many details concerning the streets and various locations in Indianapolis included in the original story, despite the fact that I'm an Indianapolis native, is a little embarrassing. Fortunately, this gave me a chance to make up for past mistakes, and put out a superior story to the original. Anyway, here's to further storytelling improvements!
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And once more, my thanks to lonegamer7 for her able assistance in editing.
Autobots appearing in both versions of this installment are Hot Shot, Blurr, Scavenger, Optimus Prime, Smokescreen, and Red Alert. Appearing in the re-edit but not the original is Jetfire.
Decepticons appearing in both versions of this installment are Starscream, Demolishor, Megatron, Thrust, and Cyclonus. Appearing in the re-edit but not the original are Straxus, Obsidian, and Tankor. Mentioned but not seen in the re-edit are Thundercracker, Skywarp, and Bludgeon.
Mini-Cons appearing in both versions are Sparkplug, Longarm, Jolt, the Race Team (Mirage, Dirt Boss, Downshift), Incinerator, Swindle, Zapmaster, and Leader-1. Appearing in the re-edit but not the original are Rollbar, Refute, Liftor, and Blackout. Mentioned but not appearing are the Street Action Team (High Wire, Grindor, Sureshock) and the Land Military Team (Wreckage, Knock-Out, Bonecrusher).
Humans appearing in both installments are Diana Masters, Bradley "Rad" White, Carlos Lopez, and Alexis Romanov. Mentioned but not appearing in either installment is Kelly Baumgartner.
This version had a number of differences from the original, mostly due to improved researching on my part. The fact that I didn't have many details concerning the streets and various locations in Indianapolis included in the original story, despite the fact that I'm an Indianapolis native, is a little embarrassing. Fortunately, this gave me a chance to make up for past mistakes, and put out a superior story to the original. Anyway, here's to further storytelling improvements!
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