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A tiny bit of writer's block hit me with this one. Not regarding what I wanted to have happen, but how to write it without dragging things out. It's another chase so I don't want it to be redundant, but it's finally Lop and Ochō fighting together so it obviously should be given proper time. I knew for a while that I wanted that dianoga sequence and I wanted it to be satisfying, but it also couldn't be too much of a detour. I won't lie, I briefly had decided to cut the entire dianoga sequence entirely, before settling on a middle ground in terms of length and detail. In the end, what was most important to me was that Ochō's actions now go full circle. She's both Lop's kidnapper and her rescuer, even carting the fallen Lepi away to safety and stepping up as a protector for her.
With that done, we just have the conclusion to get to! :)
With that done, we just have the conclusion to get to! :)
Category Story / Bondage
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