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Best follow that gut feeling. Prepare for a potential fight.
There have been few positive experiences with glowy smoky things thus far
Great to see a new page!
Well-captured anxiety talk: half-fear, half-boredom, tired but have to remain alert.
The "Too old for this shit" panel is a thing of beauty, with the expedition
streaming from the detailed background towards the viewer
through the vegetation of the field.
The opening panel intends to convey the arrival of the orangifying evening,
but it can be read as the leaves turning gold in the autumn.
"...And it took them three months to reach their goal..."
I love how in the next panel, the shadowy silhouettes
look like the eyes are just see-through fishbowls!
The last panel is very ominous and chilling,
Your environmental storytelling ability
is off the charts and through the roof!
Well-captured anxiety talk: half-fear, half-boredom, tired but have to remain alert.
The "Too old for this shit" panel is a thing of beauty, with the expedition
streaming from the detailed background towards the viewer
through the vegetation of the field.
The opening panel intends to convey the arrival of the orangifying evening,
but it can be read as the leaves turning gold in the autumn.
"...And it took them three months to reach their goal..."
I love how in the next panel, the shadowy silhouettes
look like the eyes are just see-through fishbowls!
The last panel is very ominous and chilling,
Your environmental storytelling ability
is off the charts and through the roof!
Understandable nerves!
Poor dude is definitely too old for walking through fields
And it is autumn! About a month and a half between the midsummer of the last chapter to late augustish of this chapter! there is a winter slowly coming in. Something of a timer for the folks.
Hopefully the chilling sense is just the wind.
Poor dude is definitely too old for walking through fields
And it is autumn! About a month and a half between the midsummer of the last chapter to late augustish of this chapter! there is a winter slowly coming in. Something of a timer for the folks.
Hopefully the chilling sense is just the wind.
Gee! They've been marching for a month and a half? No wonder they're all demoralized and grumpy!
You could have written an entire full chapter about a hike of that length, never minding the bandits!
Your setting is so vivid and intense, in both its dangers and comforts!
Equally terrified and attracted to the prospect of visiting the place.
You could have written an entire full chapter about a hike of that length, never minding the bandits!
Your setting is so vivid and intense, in both its dangers and comforts!
Equally terrified and attracted to the prospect of visiting the place.
Woulda been a boring chapter I feel, especially after the past year of slower chapters so best get the ball rolling!
its like doctor who and the war doctor, this is the war hiker.
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