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Commission for blacksheeptfs where a young girl babysitting meets a ratty fate
Category Story / Transformation
Species Rat
Gender Female
Size 50 x 50px
You desperately need a proof reader. Commas are your friend. You have a big problem with run-on sentences. Why does anything happen in your story? Actions don't relate to each other. She simply changes because the story says to.
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