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Reworked the story, Important changes I'd say
Smaller change first, I'll try to write the story in the past instead of the mix I have been using, trying to make the story feel less of a mess ( mostly done for my own sake )

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Now, the bigger change
As it has been nagging me, I will actually let characters speak French.
After all, the story takes place in the province of Québec, which is mainly French, but also has more English regions. If you want to know, Brice and Milan will be the natively tongued English speakers while the rest will be more French.
After all, its not like I know that the French talked in Québec is very informal, I won't make them actually fully speak like people speak there, as its not a habit to write so informally and the fact that its not very easy to recreate the more informal speeches into words either, but I still wont make them speak like the French of France.
Copy and paste of the desc of the last one because why not be lazy

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All credits to the World and Drek by  ThePatchedHobo
So
How should I name it? lol

Basically a heavy remake of my story because...
why work on the story I started on and continuing it when I can instead:

Remake it, in a different way and try to fix some issues and give a more unconventional start?