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I'm dieing alone,
You're presence sickens me.
They'll take me away,
And there is no answer.
You're a threat to my very existance,
let me do the things That I want to.
This is a fight to the end,
And you'll never take the things I believe in.
We'll be buried in seperate places,
The end is in sight.
I'll grab ahold of the light,
I wont be dieing alone..
I found another way out.
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I'm dieing alone,
You're presence sickens me.
They'll take me away,
And there is no answer.
You're a threat to my very existance,
let me do the things That I want to.
This is a fight to the end,
And you'll never take the things I believe in.
We'll be buried in seperate places,
The end is in sight.
I'll grab ahold of the light,
I wont be dieing alone..
I found another way out.
Something I just wrote, but I feel that it is terrible quality.
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well i think the reason why you thought it was terrible quality was that is was made when you were going through a revelation in your own life and in doing so felt that it was bad. i think you did very well in this poem you should check mine out i just started up poetry here today and i am in need of some critque and advice and inspiration... keep at it and let it keep flowing from your heart that way you can know that it will never be in a terrible quality but the truth about how you feel about what you are writing about.^_^
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