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The Night is Young
Life as a goddess is no simple matter, as Luna has discovered during her first few years in Canterlot. With her waking hours dedicated to winning Equestria's trust, Luna finds little time to enjoy life. As Celestia begins to worry about Luna's near-fanatical devotion, she hatches a plan to give—as well as take—her time off.
Luna is going to learn what being a "little" sister means, whether she wants to or not.
A story adaption of an RP I did with Hooligans. Looking at it now, it's a bit talking-heads, so I'll be adding some more detail to the setting soon, but for now this is good to post since everything I'm going to add will be fluff.
For those of you adverse to downloading files, you can find a link to my FimFiction Account below. Stories will be uploaded to it first, so watch me to get first-dibs!
http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Darkentrophy
The story itself can be found here:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/549.....Night-is-Young
Don't forget to Check out Not Exactly a Shining Moment while you're at it, too. Only with your help can we claim the Featured box and have a diaper-fic for all to see! Favorite and upvote to make the dream a reality!
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/542.....Shining-Moment
Luna is going to learn what being a "little" sister means, whether she wants to or not.
A story adaption of an RP I did with Hooligans. Looking at it now, it's a bit talking-heads, so I'll be adding some more detail to the setting soon, but for now this is good to post since everything I'm going to add will be fluff.
For those of you adverse to downloading files, you can find a link to my FimFiction Account below. Stories will be uploaded to it first, so watch me to get first-dibs!
http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Darkentrophy
The story itself can be found here:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/549.....Night-is-Young
Don't forget to Check out Not Exactly a Shining Moment while you're at it, too. Only with your help can we claim the Featured box and have a diaper-fic for all to see! Favorite and upvote to make the dream a reality!
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/542.....Shining-Moment
Category Story / Baby fur
Species Horse
Gender Female
Size 85 x 120px
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Nice! Finally we get to see what all those pictures were for. Can't wait for the sequel!
One thing I wanted to point out: "she fumed as she struggled to contain the ." Not sure if you didn't end the sentence on purpose, or you forgot you deleted the last word.
One thing I wanted to point out: "she fumed as she struggled to contain the ." Not sure if you didn't end the sentence on purpose, or you forgot you deleted the last word.
A flub on my part. I won't be editing this version since FA would say I have to reload it, but I'll fix the FimFiction one.
And now the fun begins.
Admirable job of contextualizing the whole affair so richly; if you give as much luxuriant description to the regression process, this will be a night to remember, for sure.
Oh, and for my part as the pedant police (in your absence), I'll point out that Luna's question during her burping fit currently reads, “What it’s doing?”
Do you have any idea how long this is supposed to run, by the way?
Admirable job of contextualizing the whole affair so richly; if you give as much luxuriant description to the regression process, this will be a night to remember, for sure.
Oh, and for my part as the pedant police (in your absence), I'll point out that Luna's question during her burping fit currently reads, “What it’s doing?”
Do you have any idea how long this is supposed to run, by the way?
Yes, I noticed that part when I wrote it. I've fixed the FimFiction version.
Dunno. I'm just going to write until the idea well runs dry.
Dunno. I'm just going to write until the idea well runs dry.
I'm saving that for the next chapter since that's when she's wearing a diaper. Also, no offence, but I felt that having her wearing a diaper as the cover picture may have deterred some readers.
Speaking of deterring, could you make a clean version of the picture where Luna and Celestia are raising the sun? I'm going to be running two versions of the story, one FimFic-safe and the other "full-flavour" version here.
Speaking of deterring, could you make a clean version of the picture where Luna and Celestia are raising the sun? I'm going to be running two versions of the story, one FimFic-safe and the other "full-flavour" version here.
Sure, provided I can get my computer working again. It got a virus that caused it to restart constantly. Thankfully, the computer's safe mode with networking seems to be working just fine. Good thing, too, since this time, I can save all my pics before my father resets the whole thing.
Alas, it's not mine, just something I found on a search. The story, however, is. Did you enjoy it?
Well can't really enjoy a story that just started, but lopoking forward to future chps ^^
i have a question, when are you going to update shinings story?
Soon, hopefully. I intend to do another chapter of Night before making a sequel to Shining Moment. I'll have to squeeze my trade with Leyen into there somehow, too. Should be a fun juggling act.
i know the feeling, and i would like to see how shining could make it worse
i would really like to ask if i could have just a littttle seek peak, if you don’t mind
(sorry about that, you got me really happy to see that)
(sorry about that, you got me really happy to see that)
I'm afraid i haven't started on it yet. Just the concept so far.
Oh, there's plenty more, I'm just not going to give away the plot yet ;p
Nope, not happening now. You'll just have to be patient like everyone else.
http://youtu.be/1ytCEuuW2_A
http://youtu.be/1ytCEuuW2_A
Wow, HAVE to say, VERY good so far, I look forward to what is next to come!
The Capn' got a kick out of the concept, especially the transfermation!
He is hopin ye choose to continue ^^
He is hopin ye choose to continue ^^
I have every intention of doing so. Alas, motivation, on the other hand is a difficult resource to come by. I actually have several chapters prepared but they don't meet my standard for publishing yet, meaning I get to go through the rather soul-crushing process of editing their morass.
As a note, stories are posted on my FimFiction account before going up on here.
As a note, stories are posted on my FimFiction account before going up on here.
Ifn ye feel inclined to, drop Ol'Squeaks a line an he can iron out a tale or two fer ye :)
Heh, duly noted. I might drop some ideas I can't get around to doing on your lap sometime in the future ;)
I need to edit the other chapters first :P.
Sounds good! Looking forward to it.
Sounds good! Looking forward to it.
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