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First chapter in a MLP story I'm currently working on. This will eventually be put up on FIMfiction, but for now, I'm putting it up here for reading and reviewing. This is my first foray into MLP outside of RPing, so any help will be appreciated.
Please, constructive criticism only. Flames will be blocked. Oh, and please comment if you fave. I'm flattered you like it, but I am putting this up to get help with improving it.
Please, constructive criticism only. Flames will be blocked. Oh, and please comment if you fave. I'm flattered you like it, but I am putting this up to get help with improving it.
Category Story / General Furry Art
Species Horse
Gender Any
Size 50 x 50px
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