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The shaking, how cold and fragile I feel
Of departed spirits manifesting its zeal
All of this pain that has been brought upon me
For it will stay with me as far as the eye can see…
Her death brought upon so many tears
The habits that caught up with her undone affairs
Her time came too soon in a just god's eye
The time was never right to die
Fraught with intense fear and stress
Rife within an opportunity supposedly towards success
Nothing but a bitter, cowardly spiel
The shaking, how cold and fragile I feel…
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The shaking, how cold and fragile I feel
Of departed spirits manifesting its zeal
All of this pain that has been brought upon me
For it will stay with me as far as the eye can see…
Her death brought upon so many tears
The habits that caught up with her undone affairs
Her time came too soon in a just god's eye
The time was never right to die
Fraught with intense fear and stress
Rife within an opportunity supposedly towards success
Nothing but a bitter, cowardly spiel
The shaking, how cold and fragile I feel…
Based on real events.
It should have never came to this...
It should have never came to this...
Category Poetry / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Gender Any
Size 120 x 81px
Very potent as many of your best pieces are.
Likewise, the slant rhyme that was in just the right place for maximum effect...
Likewise, the slant rhyme that was in just the right place for maximum effect...
Though I'm sad any time anyone is inspired by tragic events in their own life I agree with the others-this is a very well-constructed and poignant poem.
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