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So, this subject is a bit heavy.
I blame the band, Nightspins. I was listening to their song, "Carried Away" and the thought of "When you are born, you begin to die," came into my head. I've always thought of that quote as B.S. This is my response to it.
If you do listen to music while reading, I do suggest that song, "Carried Away" by Nightspins. It fits the subject here.
If you have any critiques or tips to help me improve this story or my writing, I'd love to hear them.
EDIT: Corrected some found typos and grammar, also changed the submission file to a pdf. It seems that docx is difficult for some to open on their mobile devices. So hopfully the pdf version will be more friendly to y'all. I'll try to keep my submissions as pdf's in the future.
I blame the band, Nightspins. I was listening to their song, "Carried Away" and the thought of "When you are born, you begin to die," came into my head. I've always thought of that quote as B.S. This is my response to it.
If you do listen to music while reading, I do suggest that song, "Carried Away" by Nightspins. It fits the subject here.
If you have any critiques or tips to help me improve this story or my writing, I'd love to hear them.
EDIT: Corrected some found typos and grammar, also changed the submission file to a pdf. It seems that docx is difficult for some to open on their mobile devices. So hopfully the pdf version will be more friendly to y'all. I'll try to keep my submissions as pdf's in the future.
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Very close to home, dammit Lu, didn't need to cry like this this morning.
But it has been done well.
Have a lot of tag problems to go over and fix and this is probably not even all of them.
She snapped back
“I…I’m sorry.” She began.
teasing me.” I lied.
“Everyone gather round.” Grandpa said.
“You can’t die.” I heard myself say.
It’s alright.” He whispered.
‘dying’ and ‘beaten’ (not in fiction)
But it has been done well.
Have a lot of tag problems to go over and fix and this is probably not even all of them.
She snapped back
“I…I’m sorry.” She began.
teasing me.” I lied.
“Everyone gather round.” Grandpa said.
“You can’t die.” I heard myself say.
It’s alright.” He whispered.
‘dying’ and ‘beaten’ (not in fiction)
Thank you! I'm glad it touched and moved you. I was afraid it might have been bland, heh.
And thank you. I'll try to fix those tags in a bit. Unfortunately I'm not able to correct them right this moment.
And thank you. I'll try to fix those tags in a bit. Unfortunately I'm not able to correct them right this moment.
I tried to get them, but not sure if I got them all.
Looks like I got them backwards again. Lol, I'm always doing that.
Looks like I got them backwards again. Lol, I'm always doing that.
Thanks. I had quite a few. I also was able to find a couple of typo's to fix as well.
Thank you. I was hoping to capture that sadness and the confusion that a child has during those moments. The knowledge that something is happening, but not knowing exactly what.
That was both deep, thoughtful and moving Lu-Man. It's something we all experience in life though in different ways.
Thank you.
I had a couple relatives this Grandpa was based on. Despite their own suffering they did not let it deminish their enjoyment of life.
I had a couple relatives this Grandpa was based on. Despite their own suffering they did not let it deminish their enjoyment of life.
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