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Even though I'm fairly new to this type of community, I was writing stories for years... with various levels of completion and success. So I decided to writing about something fitting, but with a twist that will be (maybe) revealed later. Enjoy the story of Ruvim - Yavian Refuge.
Ruvim goes to work, which is laboratory in tobacco factory. He talks with his friend and then he's assigned to escort a rookie.
Ruvim goes to work, which is laboratory in tobacco factory. He talks with his friend and then he's assigned to escort a rookie.
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You have some good character dynamics in this start that can go a lot of places.
Some important mechanical things, make sure you indent paragraphs as blocks kill readers fast.
Make sure to quotation your dialogue "This is how we do it," he said.
Some important mechanical things, make sure you indent paragraphs as blocks kill readers fast.
Make sure to quotation your dialogue "This is how we do it," he said.
I'm just used to this type of "text styling", especially not using the quote marks. I'll certainly make paragraph separation more visible and will test this dialogue quoting.
Thanks for the reply, by the way.
Thanks for the reply, by the way.
Both are very essential to readership. So this story example shows the end result goal for paragraph and dialogue structure.
https://d.furaffinity.net/art/helix.....lden_reeds.pdf
https://d.furaffinity.net/art/helix.....lden_reeds.pdf
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