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Heroes learning a lesson
The story with the pic!
Wow, I have a lot of stories to post. I need a manager...
Pic and Harley by nivisdoodles
Zaide by ashravens
and I wrote this/made Zyla!
Wow, I have a lot of stories to post. I need a manager...
Pic and Harley by nivisdoodles
Zaide by ashravens
and I wrote this/made Zyla!
Category Story / Hypnosis
Species Unspecified / Any
Gender Any
Size 93 x 120px
Love how you did the subtle change from them wanting to defeat Zaide to help her and how you had it snowball from there into full on worship. You do such a great job writing mental changes and I love it so much. You also did a great job describing their hero suits turning into agent uniforms, I loved the imagery you used. Great story Z, can’t wait till the next one you publish!
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